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Aeria

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PostSubject: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 3:32 am

the Netherlight Starfighter

Manufacturer
Correllian shipyards

Model
S-250 Chela-class Starfighter

Class
Starfighter

Cost
10000 credits

Technical Specifications

Length
6 meters
Width
6 meters
Height/Depth
10 meters

Maximum Speed
1800 km/h
Distance In Space
80 GMLT

Hyperdrive Rating
3rd class

Shielding
Full body deflector shielding, also able to boost shielding power by switching off weopons, shield is optional

Sensor Systems
Equipped
Navigation System
equipped

Armaments
1 Twin Laser Cannon
2 Twin Ballistic Missile Launchers



Escape Craft
unequipped

Crew
1

Minimum Crew
1

Usage

Roles
PErsonal transport, scouting craft, battle fighter

Era
New republic era

Affiliation
New Jedi order

Known Owners
Aeria t'sulra


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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:18 pm

1) For your height/depth 21 meters is too much for a 1-manned Starfighter, please decrease that to 4-5 meters.

2) Every Starship has a maximum speed, since this is a Starfighter it can go faster then others.

3) For "Distance in Space" we measure by GMLT not parsecs. And since this is 1-manned Starfighter, I say 90-100 GMLT fits its distance in space until it needs to be refueled.

4) Your Hyperdrive Rating cannot be 1st Class, that means it is best of the best, and since this is your first Starship, and it is simply a Starfighter, make it 4th-3rd Class.

5) Your concussion bomb deployer is way too much for a mere Starfighter to have, remember, this is a 1 manned-Starfighter, not a 5-Man operated Bomber. So, please remove the Concussion Bomb deployer.

Once this is done, i'll take a second look.
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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:22 pm

((if u look at the pic u can see that its height is bigger than its width, ill edit the rest))
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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:29 pm

But, for a Starfighter, that height is still too much for a 1 manned Starfighter. You can have 10 meters at most.
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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:32 pm

Edited ^^
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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:36 pm

1) For maximum speed, you may have up to 1,800 km/h. Please edit.

2) For your GMLT, you can have up to 80 GMLT.

Once that is edited, i'll take a third look.
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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:37 pm

edited again
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PostSubject: Re: the Netherlight   the Netherlight Icon_minitimeMon Aug 24, 2009 2:41 pm

Alright, looks good this application is officially...

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